If only in a corner
in a building all but gone
on a rusting beam that's given all
to keep its world from falling
Here, a sentiment
I can find hope in
Knowing that someone has found
a lasting beauty in this world
and given a little bit to me
So much love
in a few lines of a graffiti
Author notes
short, none-to-spectacular, but true. I found this in an old, abandoned paper mill and it really just made my day.
http://silverfeathers.deviantart.com/art/optimism-82930834
A contest entry
- Talk Me Down by Olivias Violin.
550 points, ended December 1, 2008, 19 entries
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I like this Very nice style!
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my favorite lines:
"can find hope in
Knowing that someone has found
a lasting beauty in this world"
lovely poem...i really enjoyed it...
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Cool!
Thank you for sharing this
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Great pix and well described in the poem. Good pair.
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