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Yielding Cede

Moonlight floats in Northern heaven
Lights beyond anything
Composure seems to know
The watcher, elsewhere
Calms desire

Bloodthirsty predator
Awaiting storm's end
No feral hunger
Of the pressures and pain
Vanquished into the stillness
of calm composure

Ricochet off caverns
Like vulture-screams
No acrid stench of rotting flesh
Decay on the pathway
Guilt, shame, and betrayal

No, as the turn of a dove
Winged downy and dew
New fallen snow
White crystal take flight
Unknown surrender
of the maiden voyage

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    November 14, 2008

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    Full of imagery...which I love..and symbolism..which I love too..so...short and simple: I love this piece...beautifully written