I am filled with weakness,
Left with sorrow,
Filled with pain,
Left with complain
A contest entry
- Short Poems ( 25 words or less) by misticmoonlite.
660 points, ended November 19, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope you like it. Thank you.
Comments
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Nicely done... you captured the essence of your pain with clarity and honesty... One can't ask for more... Well penned and best of luck.
Ken
(PS Us old folk have a tough time reading when the contrast is so low... you might want to darken the font a bit
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thank you very much for the great comment!
and thank you, for making this contest.
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well this tells a lot in a life filled with complications, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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