Twilight's Security

His cold hard lips

press onto mine

A mixture of surprise

with a romantic lust

creates a perfect moment

A moment of Echoing

silence between us

Space separates us

though our lips still touch

Dazzled my body shifts

Unnaturally

Quick hands balance me

and I Regan my strength

His concerned eyes glare

Dazzled eye looking onto his

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Dreamer With Dreams
August 3

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Nice twi-write! One technical critique. You're missing an 'i' in the word 'regain.' That's all. Overall the write is solid. You stayed true to the characters and the story/book. Good job! Keep penning more like this!

Safely hidden in the darkness,

~ The Rocker Who Lost All
The Hardest Goodbye
December 17, 2008
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Woot! I love reading poems about twilight You rock (:
wiltedvamp18
December 13, 2008
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wooohooo!
i love it and twilight
LoneFairrie
November 19, 2008
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This is awesome ^_^ Very entertaining read.
SingMeToSleep
November 14, 2008

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Loved it! Great job! And that picture- oh my God. It is one of my fav pictures from the movie!! I always have a fangirl spaz attack whenever I see it. lol.
- TurnMePurple
  November 14, 2008
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  thank you <3 i think i have 2 other twilight poems also..^_^
- - SingMeToSleep
    November 14, 2008
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    I'll be sure to check them out! And I just noticed your icon. Love it. Absolutely love it. I don't know if u can tell what mine says but it says, "I love edward cullen. Oh, sorry. does it bother you that i am in love with a fictional vmapire?" lol.