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The Forbidden Fruit

My forbidden lover, my dazzled Bella
You stun my senses to no end

My lust so harmful
To you; my dearest human
Beautiful in the sunlit field you stand
Your ivory skin not glimmering as mine

Where I cannot walk
Your feet have tread

Envious am I, of
The human blood that runs through your veins

Our love is so dangerous
Identical to the path we walk
My love~ my forbidden fruit


Though it seems, the forbidden fruit is always the sweetest

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..hi i is new, i love twilight ~ heres something from edwards point of veiw

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    December 17, 2008
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    LOVED IT


  • LoneFairrie
    November 19, 2008
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    Awe, its awesome. I love it! Great write. Good luck in the compitition. This one is great!


  • Missa
    November 14, 2008
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    cute! love how the pic is animated! good luck!


    • TurnMePurple
      November 14, 2008
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      by the way, if your a twilight fan like i am, you should check out my page. i went crazy with this editing stuff

    • TurnMePurple
      November 14, 2008
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      thank you ^_^

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