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Death of my angel

I give one wish,
I hold you tight,
Why did you have to die that night? ,
I cry in bed,
Thinking of what you said,
Pain and grieving,
What's the use? ,
I just stand there,
Fear to be left all alone,
I let out one soft moan,
I see your broken body,
I see you crying there,
But I wonder,
Do I truly care???

Author notes

Well this about my dead boyfriend...Well as you know I loved him and I still do...And this is for him....And YES I DO CARE!!!!! ^w^

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  • just mercedes gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    This is so sad - I know sometimes deep unhappiness can make us feel as though our emotions aren't working at all.

  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    November 17, 2008
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    Oh honey! I'm so srry. My b/f died over the summer. If you need someone to tlk to I'm here.