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...I see love is....

To love is surreal
timeless
in a world where things are put to a clock
for me true love came but once
and I believe it is real
because I have felt it
I have laid everything aside for it
and yet I continue to
love, a willingness to sacrifice everything you have
is what I feel now and will continue to feel
because love is eternal....

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  • oOJohnOo
    November 16, 2008
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    Beautiful wordage, and imagery. Thank you.