Looking out at the horizen,
Where the sun is setting,
A beautiful red hue,
And the deep purple of the sky.
You feel a hand on your shoulder,
As you turn,
You smile,
He runs his forefinger,
Against your cheek.
You join your hands together,
And you set off down the dock together,
To enjoy each others company.
You pass several food stands,
Until you hit a french dough stand,
Turning to the one beside you,
He smiles and nods.
Hugging him around the middle,
For you only reach up to his upper chest,
Both of you stand in line,
waiting your turn to get some food.
After recieving your french dough,
You walk to the other side of the dock,
To sit on a bench,
And eat quietly.
And to enjoy, the rest of the day.
If it's good, let me know, If it needs a little revising, I'll be happy to take requests on how better to improve it. ^-^
Comments
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how refreshing something uplifting, a beautifully written simple tale of companionship, i want to go there,
thankyou you made me smile for a few minutes on a very sad day, the mark of a true poet
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Lovely Poem
You have penned a wonderful poem. As I read I was therestanding in line. A great write and a pleasure to read . Take care, Sandy
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Well it is good, I really enjoyed this read, you have crafted quite a wonderful poem here, such emotions, great job, blessings JOhn
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