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Going Home

I awake to new desires
In the land I call my youth
In a world of magic and miracles
Wonder, love, and truth

Where the Godess of love protects me
Holding me in arms of joy
Clearing away the sadness
And tears of her little boy

Where the spirits soar up higher
And angels have wings of gold
In the morning dreams of dancers
Dancing so gracefully yet bold

Where the heavenly stars are found
Playing their favorite tune
That springs forth nothing but silence
That says I'll see you soon

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  • Bullets
    June 2
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    Lovely dear.
    Good rhymes and it flows very nicely. I like it a lot. :]
    Good luck
    -Bullets


  • PurpleSky
    June 2

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    very pretty but wish there was more to it. I like the thought you put into this piece and made it a bit unique. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you
    huggles
    Lena


  • HereComesTheSun
    January 18
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    I agree with your reasons this a great poem and i love the imagination


  • star girl
    January 10
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    Nicely done

    I liked this poem.. it was nicely written.
    Thank you so much for entering!