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Hearts live to beat together

 

 

 

Life leaves you scarred, torn, and searching;
left into a world un-whole and alone.

Once the emptiness was filled with love;
when inside a Mother's womb
you had grown.

So it is that you search
to fill this absense,
only true love
can give.

And within the eyes, and arms of a lover;
hearts beating as one:

you'll begin to live...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt-
***When my pulse flowed innocence***

A contest entry

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 18
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    oh wow wonderfully done.

    congrats on the silver.

    xoxox
    Passions


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 25

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    i truly like the form of this poem - to the eye, it is very beautiful, but the words, moreso.  Again, you have written softly, wisely of love.  Laney

  • Amarige
    January 16

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    Yes it sure true..within the heart and arms of a lover..our lives may be found sometimes...this is true love...I believe!

    Again you amaze me with your abilities to express yourself with such a passion...excellent job my friend

    Amarige


  • chilali
    December 28, 2008

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    Wow. What a great take on the prompt. This is a beauty. Congratulations on the Silver

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Stardust-luvr
    December 26, 2008

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    well done and a well deserving Silver. when the feelings of lost and emptiness prevail until the life is renewed in hope and resonence of peace heartbeats pulsate with wonder. well done and many blessings always xxx


  • penman gold member
    December 12, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Congratulations on the silver.


  • Janice M Pickett
    December 6, 2008

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    Beautiful and so worthy of a silver. Congratas on your trophy. Thanks for reading my poem. I really appreciate it.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 25, 2008
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    seeking to fill the absence...that is so true. Well written poet! Pam


  • Desire gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Woot~

    Had to come by and see the additional shelf of trophies
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    Absolutely breathtaking!
    This is a wonderful take on the prompt.
    You presented this piece well

    We seem to spend our lives searching for the missing piece. And even if briefly it can be found in love.

    Thank you for entering my contest.



    Delila


  • Desire gold member
    November 18, 2008
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    Ooooooh~

    The last line grabbed and while I was reading- could feel the surge in energy~
    Wonderful take on the prompt~
    Brevity with Beauty~
    It was funny for I was just about to begin penning for this contest
    My quill has been sorta frozen in time...
    ink like fell into the mud
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • sunoir
    November 16, 2008
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    Very profound I enjoyed your poem.


  • word20dragon
    November 15, 2008

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    Great Write

    A lot of images here very heart felt and warm a little blue in places then a burst of sunshine shone through and the blues are on the run. This brings some very personal memories back so great write.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    Life is - about choices, and learning. Growing and leanring
    and - learning. Once innocent, we take our steps toward learning. Well done to this prompt. ~Pamela


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    i love the way the poem fit the prompt exactly...
    your words are beautiful...

    becca


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    A beautiful piece you have penned here...
    just lovely
    Juls


  • first forgotten
    November 14, 2008

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    awww, this is a very deep poem. i agree very much about true love and the way you used it. "And within the eyes, and arms of a lover; hearts beating as one:" BEAUTIFUL! this is such a powerfull poem and it fits me today! i love it! good luck hunny


  • Swan song gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    Excellent poem!

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