so pale,
the winter sky -
demeter's white mantle
covers earth in icy slumber
so deep
A contest entry
- whiter words by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended November 20, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a lovely cinquain and it looks so good on this page too. I like it when a poet present their poetry this way - well done! There is something both light and deep about this poem...
A perfect cinquain - i liked this.. Thank you for sharing it with us in the contest.
~ Nicolette
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"covers earth with icey slumber" love that line...beautiful good luck
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loved this!!
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Wow, amazing.. I love the ending.. deeper than mortals can know.. beautiful.
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