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Us

I think about us and cold night replaces warm day,
The blue sky fades to dark gray,
The clouds just let out and drown,
I keep crying the tears keep comin down,
People tryin to swim,
Trying to get away,
Gettin out of here,
Hopin to make in another day,
Everyone runnin into shelter,
Tryin to stay out of the bad weather,
My whole world comes crashin down
When I think about us not being together.

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