Sun embracing full Moon
Shinning through; love begun
Two shadows joined as one
Sun sets Moon free
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Author notes
The abhanga is a Marathi form, Marathi being one of the major languages of India.
The form is : four lines, with syllable counts of 6, 6, 6, 4,
with lines 2 and 3 rhyming.
credit pic: by_amorphousbeing
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Styles Contest by Visit.Me.On.Mars.
700 points, ended January 11, 57 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think.
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beautiful
The best things are often short yet precise,I`ve always loved your writing -
Wow this is beautiful and i had never heard of that form of poetry
I also like thats its short but yet still says all that is needed. Thank you for entering and good luck!!!!
SMILEZ
---Janette -
I love the initial idea of this
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I love that last line, beautiful! What an interesting form, I'd never heard of it before, and you've given a beautiful example of it.
Well penned,
~lost -
Very beautiful and the picture helps say it all! Its amazing how so little can say so much. Good luck in your contest
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Beautifully penned abhanga. Love the picture you chose to compliment it. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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I am not familiar with the form, but your words are wonderful.
Best wishes in the contest
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