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A truth understood

From the depths of seas
from the peaks of mountains
the ravines and valleys
know not how I feel
my heart beats faster
my soul cries louder
my hands reach out for you
and if no man can see
this love for whom be
then his stupidity is his immorality
and if anyone who sees
how I feel for you
the he whom sees obvious
sees what is real
for every time I say
I love you this way
its not for one day
but for eternity stays
I told you I love
and told you I do
you know now the secret
our love holds my truth
for nothing I hide
for nothing is gone
but all that I have
is but ever longed
you have capture my being
eternally yours
here but to love you
forever and more...

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  • MermaidSinging68
    November 14, 2008
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    awww...

    Beautiful and sweet. really like it!