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The Thunder

The thunder rumbles
The rain is just pouring down
Soon will the sun come

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    The thunder rumbles
    The rain is just pouring down
    Soon will the sun come


    A nicely written Haiku about the rain and the hope of sunshine.


    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas

  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 20, 2008
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    November 17, 2008
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    November 16, 2008
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