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Technology

I’ve never been to California
and I probably never will,
‘cause I can see it on TV
and get the same thrill.

I have a 50-inch screen TV
with over 400 stations,
it's perfectly crystal-clear,
and has high definition.

I just got a new cell phone,
it has a smooth touch screen
and internet access,
if you know what I mean.

I have my laptop on
and my bluetooth too,
I sure do love technology,
how about you?

Some can't comprehend
that I'm totally fine
watching TV all day
on my behind.

The screens are my eyes
and the remotes are my feet,
I can see the whole world
without touching concrete.

-  Marissa?
-  Yeah?
-  Get a life...
-  A life??? SWEET!!! Where do you download one of those?
- 

Author notes

Still editing. lol. [[i dont have a tv that big, or that many channels, or that cell phone lol]]

--Missa

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  • Deserted heart
    December 1, 2008
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    haha this is a wonderful poem. I think you should write another poem to go along with this, but change it to how the older generations view technology. You should go to California, its great there!! Anyways this was a nice upbeat poem and a great little 4 line ender there.


    • Missa
      December 1, 2008
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      hhmmm...i might just write another one like that lol.


  • Rhapsody
    November 20, 2008
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    ok...good job, just not that interesting


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    November 17, 2008

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    I must say you do have a realy good tallent for writing poetry I enjoyed reading this.
    But I just can't figure out if you are bragging,or Complaining. either way good write.
    Good luck in the contest.
    ED.


    • Missa
      November 17, 2008
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      oh, i'm not doing either. i dont have ANY of that stuff! well...except the laptop.

  • theshadowedone
    November 16, 2008

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    i like the end. that's what got me to laugh a little bit. "where do you download one of those?"

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