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I want him

hes beautiful isnt he?

you dont deserve him

but i want him

too bad
you dont deserve him

bu--

no

leave her be

HEY I SAID SHE DOESNT DESERVE HIM!

and i think she does

i want him

go after him

YOU DONT DESERVE HIM YOU STUPID B---

YES she does, now leave her alone

both of you leave me alone
i want him

get him

LEAVE HIM ALONE

i wont, i cant.
i want him

LEAVE H--

go to hell
she'll get exactly what she deserves

i want him. ill have him

Author notes

okay this makes me sound crazier than i thought i was, but this was easier than i thought, so maybe im crazier than i thought..lol..

it was for a contest..just so you all know..lol

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Comments


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 14, 2008

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    Great take on the subject. I know os many who have said this to themselves OFTEN,,LOL thanks for entering.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 14, 2008

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    Self talk? well this is how it would go if it gets set in motion hahhaa you nailed it for true good luck in the contest lol