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Seduce Me


He smiles at me and I smile back.
We both know what will happen next.

He removes my clothes one piece at a time.
Then turns me over on my stomach.
Starts licking my back from top to the bottom of my feet.
I moan and moan with the exquisite pleasure I am feeling.

He turns me over starts all over again.
I cry out with pleasure, my breasts heaving.
My heart is beating at an almost alarming rate.
My breathing ragged.

When he enters me.
I have no time to speak, just time to have one climax after enough.
He then explodes inside of me with a fury I have not known,

He cradles me in his arms until he starts all over again.

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  • Angelflower
    December 4, 2008

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    Aww this is really lovely. it has such passion yet it has a touch of tenderness as well. You did a wonderful job with the prompt. Thank you very much. best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • ChaingangAngel
    November 25, 2008
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    WOw

    This was good write I could see the imagery in this write thanks for entering my contest!