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Whispers of Sorrow

Ever since that night,
I can still hear you whisper,
sorrowful things,
That should have come to be.
You whisper of our love,
How even still,
the memory lives
With every breath
and every beat
of my broken heart.
Broken
you left me here
in this world
you say is so dear
but the memory of you
whispering in my ears
on lonely nights
keeps me sane
and from fright.
If only your time
was not so short
I will meet you on the other side
to share or whispers of delight.

Author notes

#3:- Whispered sorrows... I chose prompt 3. Hope you can figure out the meaning

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  • FreeTara
    November 18, 2008
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    I wish i could have given everyone gold!!


  • FreeTara
    November 15, 2008

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    This is really sweet and powerfully sad at the same time, brilliant well done!! Its leaves you breathing and thinking i had to read it twice!!