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Soul

  Deep in the night
we find what we were searching for
Our sanity
our hope.
All is gone in the soul of the dead
all is gone in the soul of the living
A beacon through the dark
catches our admiration
A heart full of pain
a life full of suffering
Can shine so bright
in this darkened world we call our own
How is this true
yet how is it not
Can we question the very soul of our joy
yet can we trust the unknown
Against our every desire
yet together with our every wish
We look together to the stars
live
love
learn
die

Author notes

Just something I thought of. in a way I guess its questioning religon thing is I'm atheist so I have no idea where this one came from.

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  • TheDeadMan
    November 17, 2008
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    nice poem. great texture of words, if that makes sense.


  • silvermisery
    November 16, 2008

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    Very nice....wow I like this a lot, esp. since when I get upset, it helps a lot to just go out, esp. at night, and look at the stars...


  • hks
    November 14, 2008
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    :]]]]

    true
    live to learn how to love.
    and learn very other things. :]]]]


  • MermaidSinging68
    November 14, 2008
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    nice!

    I like this!