strongly
considering
dipping my black pen in
the color of blended rainbows
again
A contest entry
- whiter words by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended November 20, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I so enjoyed this cinquain and the nuances buried within...it points towards the future or future intentions but it also says a lot about past actions. Very cleverly written and a creative take on the prompt!
Thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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very clever ...kudos made me smile
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i am new to this form of writing, for being colorless it seems loud and proud...this poem could be taken a number of different ways. I like this...I might look into this form thanks for sharing this here. Good luck in the contest.
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thanks
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ooo..beautiful and clever...great write good luck
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pretty,pretty
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Don't consider it, do it.
Random stranger, white mind.
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Pretty good, though no white.
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if you blend the colors of the rainbow it makes white
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If you say so, I believe it.
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take a color wheel and spin it really fast
you'll see -
quit humoring me man
it's true... damn it! -
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I just tried spinning the color wheel really fast, and I saw virginal
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excellent
now i've got to go get my colorwheel
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Now this sounds a beautiful way to head into a weekend
C
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don't get me wrong
i'm still a bitter piece of pie... lol -
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well a little dip will do you to test the waters and then you can just dive in
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