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Daddy's Girl

As she holds her stomach
She looks at him
And says.
"It's our baby girl.
She's kicking.
Wanna feel?"
He looks at her and smiles
And touches the little foot
That's kicking her mommy
And a tear appears in the corner of his eye.
She's already a daddy's girl.
She's his world and life.
He doesn't know what he'd do
If someone hurt her

15 years down the road
His little girl comes crying home
She runs to daddy
And says
'Daddy, there's this boy.
And I think I'm in love.
But he just can't seem to love me, too.
I don't know what to do."
He looks at her and smiles and says.
"Baby girl,
You're so much better than that.
You're your mama's world and a daddy's girl.
And no one can replace that.
So, don't worry.
One day he'll realize what he's lost."

It's 10 years later
She's getting married to the boy she loves
And she's all dressed in white.
Her daddy knocks on her door.
And says.
"Darling, are you ready?"
She looks at him and says
"Daddy, I'm nervous.
What do I do?"
He looks at her and smiles.
"Well, honey.
You have stars in your eyes
and the sun in your smile.
Any man would be lucky to have my baby girl.
So, don't worry, darlin'
Every thing will be alright."
And he walks her down the aisle with a tear in his eye

Daddy's girl is 50 years old.
And she's by her daddy's side
His last words to her
"Baby, why ya cryin?
Daddy'll be alright.
I'm going away.
But you'll see me again someday.
You're daddy's girl and mama's world.
Don't let that change.
Life takes us all by storm
But, honey, you've avoided your curveballs.
I love you.
And don't you forget that."

She got stars in her eyes
And the sun in her smile.
Daddy loves his baby girl
And nothing's ever gonna change.

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  • L.Jay
    December 15, 2008
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    WoW that was awsome you told a wonderful story!


  • angel of the dead
    December 5, 2008

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    WOW THIS IS SO AMAZING I AM SPEECHLESS!!!

    you are an amazing writer and this is an amazing poem i loved the flow of it and the way it made me feel i could feel all of the emotion like it was a rich chocolate i just ate and then i yearned for more wow just wow *angel gives a round of applause* wow great job and great write!!!!!!!


    TWO DOZEN ROSES FOR YOU!!!
    LOVE angela


  • x-Valiant-x
    November 19, 2008
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    wow.... thats just amazzing.... i wish i could give you more than three stars for that....


  • Papabear 4 Rosered
    November 16, 2008

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    Outstanding and very moving

    You paint a memorable picture with your words. This is truely a beautiful piece. On an editorial note however....
    I'm going away.
    But you'll (see?) me again someday.


  • SunshineForever
    November 15, 2008

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    This poem is so moving. I feel like I am going to cry. Honestly, this blew my mind. Its so sweet and honest...I absoloutly love this poem


  • Guerrero
    November 14, 2008
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    omg! this brought tears to my eyes..this is really beautiful..amazing! wow!


  • Mr.
    November 14, 2008
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    Very sweet.

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