God created man
and set him loose
with minimal direction.
Then God made woman
with the excuse
that man requires correction.
Author notes
Just be good and do what you're told.
A contest entry
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What did you think
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concise and full of such profounded wisdom. this is heavy and so truth. thanks for entering.
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This has the ring of truth! I have probably never heard this theory expressed better than this. I like it.
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ROFLMAO. the poem was very witty, but i busted out laughing upon reading the notes. cynical tongue in cheek - gotta love it.
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hehehehehe Yeh I like this. Well Said. hehehehe
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Great write! I love it. I love the title. Is this in one of those "For Dummies" books? lol. I've been bored out of my mid working on college assignments for most of the day. I needed the smile and giggle.
Keep writing.
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LMAO
Stark-naked truth. Thank you for entering.
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lol this is a great write! short and to the point! another amazing piece from you. keep up the great work. i enjoyed reading this , thank you for sharing this!
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Hilarious!
And in conclusion the contusion ends in Exodus!
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haha-hehehe-hoohoo.... I liked this but am drunk so don't know.... just kidding... you are great!
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haha awesome, i know someone else who would have got a real kick out of this as well so 3 cheers 4 u!!!
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lol! You have a great turn of phrase and a wicked sense of humour - are you related to God, by any chance?
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haha.this one made me smile.. thanks i needed..i love it.. nice write! good luck in the contest
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