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Dear Ma'am


We are writing to inform you
that a recent mental lapse
has left you a burden less;

it occured
in broad daylight,
(in a public place, no less)
and there was much that could be done,
but little that could be effective.

There were no tears,
all the reports have found,
although found with her was paper
that she had scrawled on
(neatly, orderly, perfectly)
and found a dedication
to who we presume is you:

                                                                'you are my sunshine, my only sunshine...'

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  • Kiss the girl--x
    November 16, 2008
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    talk to me chelli.

    love this though by the way, especially the shivers the songy quotey bit, i hope no one ever takes your sunshine away by the way, figuratively, not like someone literally forever standing in front of you blocking the sun.

    talk to me.

    &loves.


  • Mrs. Mautino
    November 15, 2008

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    Love it...made me really sad though And that's what my mother used to sing to me Are you ok?

  • a n e s t h e s ia
    November 14, 2008

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    Effective tone.

    I have a stupid question: How are you?

    And a stupid offer: Talk to me?