Oh baby look at me!
Looking so beautifully.
Oh now wait, hold on.
Why would you say that?
Because I think I look good.
If I was a gangster I would be straight hood!
Oh you Love to fantasize dont you?
Shew...
Well I like to think positive about myself.
More like put yourself up on a shelf.
Now I'm off to school.
Oh I bet you think your so cool.
I have lots of friends so that must mean I am well liked.
It's more like thay want to tell you to take a hike.
Ok Ill settle this with you now, my little devil inside thee.
You must only criticize as o go off to sleep.
Ok fine whatever I agree.
A contest entry
- Talk to yourself by Janice M Pickett.
800 points, ended November 15, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honest opinion please
Comments
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Cute this gave me a chuckle. Thanks for entering.

