Feeling the wind on my skin,
Imagining it to be feathers,
And how it would feel to fly.
What would the world look like from high up?
Author notes
Prompt: feather
Word limit: 40, 27 used
Please tell me what you think
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I think many, or perhaps all of us, would want to know how it feels to be the wind or a bird or a feather!
Some nice tight writing here, and the poem looks good upon this page too. Thank you for sharing it with us in the contest.
~ Nicolette
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This is truly so beautiful and light and.. wow. sigh. I am speechless.
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this is so beautiful, i love what you did with the prompt, i can feel a spring wind as i read this, fantastic poem, wow, best of luck in the contest
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Beautiful words, fits the prompt so well. If anyone can fly, it will be you.
Wonderful...Best wishes in the contest
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wonderful my friend, i mean this is beautiful, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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