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LORD...allah... A.W.A.K.E

Slowly let go… breath.. gasping… let go of everything …everything I held dear... leave this materlistic world of silent whispers… fly…break free from the chained bangles on my ankles that danced to the enslaving flute…fooling all those who played…
I see another world a different light… with trembling fright I stand…
no longer do I seek something in return… for I no longer do it for them…i do not give to get taunted thorned roses …piercing through the baby flesh of my fingertips as I tried to hold… fooled by the mirage of its beauty…
The beginning of all beginnings and the end of all ends I am now my LORD'S
HIM the light through my numbed darkness when I was too stuck in the game to see my own soul die in the flame
With the emptiness of a black hole silence of the desert night that was called my heart…
Swepped away by the gentle touch of my LORDS embrace…
Everywhere I turn the beauty of HIS presence calls… lulls me…cradles as if a child ….and I am….lost within this world of people with eyes wide shut…
masked faces pretending to be everything there not…
yet my LORD holds me… heals me of the wounds they tore through my soul…tore then tended to my wounds with the salt of the ocean sea…grinning…
HE wakes me...i see the world through HIS eyes… the beauty… breathtaking… intoxicating ...
I do not seek your satisfaction… or praise… nor your sweet poisoned words…
I forgave... let go… even of all I gave…
another world calls…. whispers the blossom through the light of my broken backed dreams…
and sunrays catch the raindrops as they fall…ocean waves call…dancing flames… ancient dreams…falling calling…broken winged flew…
once entrapped within the snow layered grave …that I carved with my own hands… heart stops…night walks…time froze…
I see another world …a different light with trembling fright… I stand …my lungs piercing with the scream of living again… my eyes raining… speechless by your beauty…my LORD my hearts enslaved... in your name engraved

Heal my wounds…

Can’t run away from yourself
Nor your nightmares or scares
Believe me I know…i’ve tried

Live…wake up from this dream of yours…
Think you live yet you know better…
A.W.A.K.E

well... i havent written in a long time... soo i don knw.. i don even knw if its a poem... LOL jst tell me wha u think..

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 31
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    Love this write, hun...I will be back tomorrow night to give an indepth comment...It is midnight now...and I have church and company for lunch...Keep penning this is great! God bless you..


  • kalsang
    December 3, 2009

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    god... u are such a gr8 poet.....m.mm..mm..m beautiful


  • TOEchikira
    November 16, 2008
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    oh my gosh this is beautiful!! one of my favorite poems ever definatley. mucho fantastico lol <3


  • hks
    November 14, 2008

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    the light through my numbed darkness when I was too stuck in the game to see my own soul die in the flame

    that is actually a pretty freaking incredible line.

    ;]]

    "pretending to be everything their not."
    i like that line also

    this is very nice. :]

    sunrays catch the raindrosp
    crap
    this is some quality amazing

    • tigerseyes
      November 15, 2008
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      LOL thanks !!

      to sweet ... lilsheep keep ur head up
      much love
      z

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