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Silencio

 
 
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 Silently standing in the center of a world only existing in my mind
 
 
 

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Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://kaikuskylianfay.deviantart.com/art/Found-102307489
13 words, 13 used

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 17, 2008

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    Only in your mind is a great imagery to have on the picture, there is mystery yet strength

    ♥
    Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • chilali
    November 15, 2008

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    Awesome take on the picture. 13 words and you nailed it. Well done


  • Kari gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Yes, I can see that for sure...Sometimes I really long to be in that place of such divine piece.

    Kari


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Well done, wonderful take on the prompt and use of only 13 words.

    Best wishes in the contest


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008

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    a wonderfully beautiful dark write my friend, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, i like how in a few words you brought the picture to life.

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