Greedy I seek a mothers love,
Always in the wrong people,
Hearing about its greatness.
This greed has turned me,
My soul is eaten up inside,
By a deep roaming demon.
Will I ever be free again?
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Prompt: Orphan
Limit: 50 words, 37 used
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The background is amazing and perfect for your emotional write
Deeply touching and dark this reaches out for a hand ... excellent!
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Thank You for Your Entry & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Awesome take on the prompt. This is just a brilliant write! Good luck in the contest.
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Sad and a beautiful write, sometimes it takes a long time to find inner peace with the past, keep the hope alive.
Well Done...Best wishes in the contest
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this is a said and strong poem my friend, you did fantastic on it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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