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The Aladin Effect

We two stand alone in the world
nothing around us means anything in this moment
we pull together, attaching our lives for one moment
maybe just this once
maybe the first of many
maybe the first of a future
a kiss
special in this moment for what it is
the magic prevails and I'm swept away

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  • GypsyEyes
    November 30, 2008

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    this was magical write and i love the softness of it!
    thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox

  • Virginia Logsdon
    November 19, 2008
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    Ahh! This is so breathtaking in it's effect.