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A fool i am

I am not a joke, but may be a fool.
to be sitting here like this.
I say things that i shouldn't.
and still i am here.
A joke i am not.
But a fool some say i am.
For not being happy with what i have.
With the fountain of information i have
I should be living more comfortably.
For i am a fool, i will admit.
For not stepping to the plate and taking what is mine.
But a joke i am not.
For i am content with what i have so far.
And life has given me a loving family.

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I am not a joke, but may be a fool. .

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  • penman gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • georgie
    November 15, 2008

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    a great contest entry but the last line should be changed to given instead of give,
    great piece,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


    • HpWICKEDangel
      November 16, 2008
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      thanks for the typo. i will change. and yes it should be given.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Well said! As long as we know and appreciate our family and those who love us, we aren't a joke at all. Thanks for entering and good luck!