before you fell from the heavens
and landed in my heart,
my world was bleak
and yet I was granted the sweet joy
of having the skies open above me
spilling out colors, smells, tastes one could never dream of
but the greats of these gifts,
the very reason for them was you
I live in fear that one day realize
my imperfection and know your too good,
till then I bask in the golden light of your love
feel a shiver roll down my body
when your lips speak my name,
the rush when I look deep into your
soft velvet brown eyes
know you mean it when you say you love me
A contest entry
- Put Him On A Golden Pedestal by Frodofan.
525 points, ended November 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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skies*
Very real fears and feelings. Thanks for entering. Nice descriptions. -
hi there
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i like the imagery of falling from the heavens.
i also love this line
spilling out colors, smells, tastes one could never dream of
wonderful imagery of spilling out those things. excellent.
I live in fear that one day realize
my imperfection and know your too good,
aww this was cute
soft velvet brown eyes
wow hypnotic
well done and congrats and best of luck with the contest
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