Falling Leaves and Frosty Morns

November comes, we wish to stay its spell

Of falling leaves and frosty morns as well.

Velvet snows of winter cloak the ground,

Erasing summer’s colors and its sounds.

Methinks this time before the Christmas tide

Brings winter’s winds and drives us all inside,

E’en as we give our thanks and eat our fill,

Rejoicing as the fire fights outside’s chill.

Author notes

November is an interesting kind of "tweener" month

A contest entry

November Acrostics Contest by Barbara. 550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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JeannieD Hunter
November 19, 2008

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Well done! I agree that it is a 'tweener' month. I think March is as well
Great acrostic that flows wonderfully! Congratulations on the shiny Dad!
Ellis
November 19, 2008
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Terrific rhyming acrostic
Very good writing
Veronica Leigh
November 16, 2008

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Beautifulness! Makes me so excited for this Christmas since I'll be having my very first white one! Good job, acrostics are fun
catz
November 16, 2008

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This is a beautiful Acrostic, and of my favorite season, too. And rhyming!!! I have a hard time trying to get acrostics to rhyme and flow well at the same time but yours here is superb

Beautifully written, Paul and congratulations on the Bronze... it goes well with season of the poem

Dee
Arrianna MacEwan
November 16, 2008

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this is magnificent. the flow and rhyme are perfect...as usual grandaddy
Barbara
November 14, 2008
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Pretty cool This has a nice tight ryhme that flows so smoothly that it made a pleasure to read. Not sure of the 's in fights, though.

"Velvet snows of winter cloak the ground," .. nice imagery

Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest