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Towards worlds that shine and feelings run fine
Even emotions control your sane mind
We continue the journey in dark-side moonshine
Cash registers ring and cash registers call
We're heading for riches watch out for the fall

On and On we go towards the flow
It rocks on the great know
so we put on a show
And play beautiful music real slow

In Grandchester Meadows furry animals run free
All the children at play outside they stay
Cause the pudding they ate will wait at the gate
Teacher relate to the worm of the great
Down The brick in the wall relates

We all retaliate
We sing sayings of pride
We don't need no special words
Don't need no brain curds

Ummagamma dreams to his friend relates
The organ grinder plays the music of strays
And farm animals bleat to the sound of a beat
For I feel your relief to the legal mans brief
So Mr don't go to that fire down below

We burn bright down here
Without no more fear
And the music's in gear
To the drums that we hear

No more control
For the body becomes whole
And black is the hole
We dig and we die no wonder why
Butterfly

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10. All you touch and all you see, is all your life will ever be (Pink Floyd)

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    You can't help but respond with a creative and imaginative piece for Pink Floyd. You did an awesome job! Thanks so much for taking the time to enter my contest. I’m honored to have you show your work here.


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    The imagery was amazing. Very well done.

    Best regards,
    ~Lisa~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 14, 2008
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    My friend this is golden i mean wow, seriously, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest