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My new friend Noor

Her name is DramaLady and she lives in Iraq,
And I hope she knows I shall have her back,
I believe much like she does about the earth,
That without you'll never recieve the hearth,

My Friend is only Twenty-two,
I am so glad that I met you,
She likes the way that I write,
And who knows one day we could be tight,

We come from different worlds you see,
But my new friend is much like me,
She seems as nice as can be,
Now I am going to make a tea,

I know this is quick,
But I have to split,
Hope that you like it Noor,
Sorry I do not have time to write more.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    AW! THIS IS JUST THE SWEETEST!!!

    It sure does fill ones heart with such happiness and brings a feeling of self worth when someone takes the time to leave what is in their heart upon yours.'s


    • Atlantis
      November 16, 2008
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      I am happy that you liked it I am trying to make new friends and well She was the only one to really except me


  • Hikari Lady
    November 14, 2008

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    Awwwwwwww!!! This was the best write I have ever recieved from a friend. It was wonderful, actually brought tears to my eyes... Thank you so much, I am so happy I met you and I sure love your work, got to read more of it now. lol
    Can I share your tea?
    Your write was more than enough to bring warmth to my day, I really needed it.
    Much love your way, honey. I'd love to talk to you more and get to know you even better.
    Thank you again for being so lovely and kind.

    best wishes
    ~Noor


    • Atlantis
      November 14, 2008

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      I am so happy that you liked it. You are welcome to share my tea anytime. I am happy I met you To and would love to get to know u

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