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Fire

To glow with the brightest red
The deepest color of blue within;
No mercy shown in its path
All acquaintances lay in ash.

Rage which slowly had grown
Building up ever so slow;
Then quickly shockingly explode
The fire has been unleashed.

All human control lost to anger
I have been patient all this time;
I kept it in for ever so long
Now let happen what may.

Destroying and consuming
Till the appetite has been pleased;
Fading away in the smoky night
Perhaps returning another day

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  • Devilish Temptation
    November 14, 2008

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    wow what can I say awesome my friend intense with emotion I like the uniqueness. This piece you have written shines Talent
    take care and thanks for sharing

    • Julien
      November 14, 2008
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      Thank you. If you liked this one, check out my other poem More is Less. Let me know what you think.