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Hold Me…


 
 
you turn this feelings into
a magnificent  piece of emotion
as I feel your passionate kisses
your lips touching mine
our nakedness in the dark
two bodies entwined as one
our  body aches for each other
been longing for you inside me
as you enter to me in a perfect rhythm
those soft hands touching my vulnerability
reaching the peak of exploding point
slowly we collapse in each others arms
Your soft whisper saying
”I Love you” to my ears
Sends smiles to my lips as I close my eyes
Hold me now … hold me tight
I’ll hold you forever in my heart

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Yes..love is here ..there..and every where..bringing the scenario of your enjoyment and its magic as well..well done indeed...