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Innocent girl - little rose.
Some of the innocent are virgins,
but you're not one of those.
You've danced with demons,
and raped the world,
to find innocence on your own.
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Wow. This is definitely powerful. It kind of takes you off guard a little bit, but in a good way [= I could definitely sense a deep meaning to this. Very enjoyable. Thanks for another lovely entry ^.^
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Thanks a lot
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Interesting.
Best wishes,
love Jin -
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Thanks!
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wow
thats good poem you wrote
"Sara" -
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Thanks.
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your welcome =)
"Sara"
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