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Forever

He looked at me and I looked away
To shy to meet his gaze
I smiled to myself thinking of his eyes
And my heart they always amaze

I looked down to my work trying not to think
Of his beautiful body I crave
And I listened to his voice to the class he spoke
I dare not look for I'm not brave

When the school bell rang I dropped my books
And no one cared to help me
Then a hand reached down to help me out
And i raised my head to see

Into the eyes I love so much
Of emerald green I stared
Everyone gave me mocking looks
But I no longer cared

He smile at me and I started to blush
But from his face I couldn't stray
Then I looked back down and started thinking
"He just made my day"

He stood up straight and offered his hand
Still smiling I gladly accepted
But to my surprise he didn't let go
And I started feeling protected

He put his arm around my waist
And held my books within his grasp
My heart was pounding and my blood was hot
But I knew it wouldn't last

I couldn't help but blush but he just smiled
And made me feel so good
The feeling I got from no other one
But knew I someday would

He felt like I did and wanted to see
If I was also the same
I just blushed and nodded and moved just closer
To his flawless slender frame

He smiled again and we walked out the room
And our hands were laced together
I looked at his face I loved so much
And knew we would be forever
~Kay~

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  • Merciful-Manner
    March 20

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    hmmmm

    I dont know, your poem made me kinda of angry. Because i was thinking of all the times I've helped people pick there books up when they drop them, and all the times I've helped someone and no one ever seemed to care. So yea sorry, getting to personal haha, but yea good write I really enjoyed it (except for me thinking of past experiences while reading it) But yea Good luck in my contest


  • DogFish silver member
    February 6
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    blush !


  • Good Mourning Moon
    December 26, 2008
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    This is really pretty and I hope you guys are still together!


  • Vars
    December 2, 2008

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    Amazing write! I loved it. Absoloutly loved it. It was very well written and it was precisly perfect. You followed the prompt to a T and it was very deep and emotional. Some parts even made me blush. Good write! I wish you luck in the contest and thank you for entering


  • Maybe Anastasia
    November 29, 2008
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    very nice write. it has kind of an odd flow but I liked it. thank you for the entry


  • Rhythm Child
    November 25, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • Rhapsody
    November 20, 2008
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    ? tell me more about this, exactly what is this about


  • in silver script
    November 18, 2008

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    Awww this is so sweet! I always love a good love poem, and this is an awesome one. Thanks a bunch for entering!


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Thank you for this sweet entry
    Good luck in the contest


  • FreeTara
    November 14, 2008
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    Wow, this is beautiful, deep and personla i could feel myself there

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