Bruised and battered.
my heart has been shattered.
He tried to blame me,
For why we could never be.
My heart died,
Every time he cheated and lied.
Then come back trying me,
Trying to tape together me.
Soon the tape started to tear,
And I was back there,
To be taped up again,
I guess I'll never win
Author notes
Blooming Poet
A contest entry
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I Like This. I Can Relate To It Which I Find Hard To Do With Poems And Stuff But I Could. Me And My Ex Have Broke Up Buh Whenever He Wants Me Back He Clicks His Fingurs And I Come Running Just So He Can Hurt Me Again :/
So Great Write And Keep Penning !
Karra-Mayy x -
Hoodwinked
Hmmm I thought so but I didn't want to say so. You deserve better and I hope you find it. You are a human being. -
O.O WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*widened eyes* TURELY AMAZING SERIOUSLY!!!!!!!!
okay i am bookmarking this one hell yeah emotion and short the best kind of poems not that much to read *laugh a little*
and hey if he comes back to try you then kiss his dick off and don't fall for it because he's the fucking ass prick for not knowing that he has a prima dona right in his hands and just throws you away that's bullshit
if i was you i'd give him a one two and dick cut off and just high tail it out of there
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I could feel the pain myself as I read these words. Such painful emotions
I am sorry you had to go through this -
I could feel the sadness oozing from this page, it is terrible to be used in this way. I felt the pain. Best to your fine Bandit
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hey love,
tis a sad, but true set of words ye have penned.
lovely couplet rhyming! =D
well done and don't sweat relationships, cause the only true one without lies and deceit is the one you need with God in order to keep life together..
loves and hugs,
K
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Sis, I'm beginning to believe that this is the norm for relationships now a day. Just this disappointment, cheating, and lying. It seems that it has touched everybody I know.
<3
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Sad and tragic are some relationships, you just have to wait for Mr. right to find you, he will.
Well Done...Best of luck in the contest
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