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The Forgotten

In a world
with a few billion people
you learn to realize
they don't need you
you learn that life
is pointless
you learn that your scars
are meaningless
you learn that they
dont really care

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    November 14, 2008
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    I've felt like this before, it sucks feelnig like that D; But anyway this was a nice read. :]


  • trekkergirl
    November 14, 2008

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    hummmm a very negative view on life and people don'tcha think? I mean true not everyone needs everyone but there is usually someone who loves you and needs you. Not many people are an island. People do need people.

    Even tho I don't agree with what your poem says I do think that you said it very well. This poem of yours flows very well and you get your point across very well. Thanks for sharing this.


    • perfectdarkangel
      November 14, 2008
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      thank you, I know theres probably someone who cares but I wrote this when I was feeling very alone and that no one cared sooo yeah thanks for the comment