I hold this close to my heart
for my heart bleeds
like my wrists
what was once a little white flower
has been tainted
crimson
my wrists they bleed
just like my heart
listen to it beat slowly
as the blood from my wrists pour
for once everything
is silent
I can smell the sweet aroma
of blood
and life
it really is too short for once
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Wow this is amazing!
There is so much pain in it.
Really good
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I love the ending. amazing write.
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Truly captivating! your words catch your emotions very well, The reader can really understand and imagion your pain. Very well written!
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for once everything
is silent
I can smell the sweet aroma
of blood
this oem was so vivied and hard to keep on reading, you put a lot of emotion in this one and is very powerful. i hope things get better doll..xox
vanna
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Oh honey so sad this is
My heart cries out when I feel this pain from the young people so hurt and unknowing of sao much love out here for them . I have no children of my own and if I could so embrace you with the love I so have we could find how precious life could so be . You arent alone in these feelings for many before you have fell and felt their was no reason to fight it anymore but here I am alive and full of this
knowledge that your life is only an armlength away from such love and feelings that the mind often leads us astray but honey their is better days for you if you truly want them then look beyond the mind feel your heartbeat and know the heart is capable of many loves it will heal and bring you such love and joy once again .Take my hand and lets talk and you will see in finding this you will become free of this pain and live again .Talk to me Im here every day and just think you will never know if you dont try . Message me and lets live today
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when i wrote this it was a vent just like most my poetry is, but after i write things like this, depending on whats going on i usually get over what im upset about pretty quickly so yeah thanks tons for the comment
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Very Dark
Fantastic ending, and it is just the right length for my concentration. You are letting everyone see your inner being, and sometimes, just the odd occasion, you will regret it, because someone close will see it, and .....................
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someone close will see it. This is one very good reason not to do it. I hope this is just imagining. Life's too good and I say this even though life has been BAD at times.
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