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Purgatory

And here I stand, all alone
where I'm used to being
I long for your touch
I long for healing
but it's out of reach

And here I go
breaking promises I swore I'd keep
desolation is where I belong
this is my purgatory

This is where I belong today
after putting my faith in you
this is what I deserve today
for thinking I could believe
I tried to reach out
I tried to connect
this is my fucking story

And you are my purgatory

This is where I am
between heaven and hell
awaiting a judgement I already know
I thought I could win
I thought I could see
but now I'm alone and it's where I should be
(repeat chorus)

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It's not finished, but I definietly need some help from my zombie queen. Please!

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  • xxuglyducklingxx
    June 29, 2009

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    "And you are my purgatory"- That is Stunning. I think it's incredibly how soul baring the truths that this song strips out. "desolation is where I belong". I find that really admirable. Insanely Wicked write dude.


  • Tripp-Radio
    November 17, 2008

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    Forgiveness please...

    Sorry I havent checked this out. It blew me away and falls together like magic. I relate to this like crazy. I can hear it already. -closes eyes and breathes it in- Your gona knock some people off their ass when you perform this..

    Your Zombie Queen Misses You Much!



    Keep up the awesome work lovely.


  • catherinevania
    November 15, 2008

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    "And you are my purgatory"
    The comparison of love to purgatory is beautiful. Purgatory being a temporary condition of torment, and you don't know if after the torment if you're going to heaven after, or hell... I've never thought of comparing love this way. Beautiful, just beautiful.

    xo
    C