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His Temper

His godly appearance
Does not lack, however
I don’t need his interference
And still sustains his clever

Caramel eyes have tuner to coal
Thirst like obsession; craving
What beast has his soul?
Him of all people need saving

Why is he so irate?
Melodist voice pierces angrily
He thinks he can avoid our fate
Why must he act like this daily?

Obsession reins of my heart
Irritation shifted away
I never want to part
Forever, your un-hunted prey

Author notes

how bella may feel about edwards temper- at times

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  • shootingstarz13
    November 26, 2008
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    YAY!

    why hello theere! this is most likely how bella feels u make mega sense ....!


  • LoneFairrie
    November 14, 2008

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    Awe I like it, its quite awesome. I agree with it actually i do think that might be how Bella MIGHT feel about Edwards temper. Good write and interesting read