A door slams
A heart stops
A tear falls
Hearts break.
What happens
When we run
Out of life
But are left
To breathe?
Words fly
Hopes fall
Depression
Hits hard
Everyone sees
But no one cares
People walk by
Like you're not there.
A body lays
Still on the ground
To be heard no more
To suffer no more
A spirit freed
By the merciless
Blade of the
Unforgiving knife.
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Seriously im not into suicide poems but this ones cool...um just so u know there are alot of dicks on all poetry
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I loved it! That is seriously all i have to say, because that explains it.
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My names meg but most just call me Tox. my friend Spazz is alot like you..here names amanda....
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ok
thats funny cause my nickname is spaz lol ironic
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very nice, i like your form of poetry, very curt, short, and asks questions but also tells it as it is
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awh.. gosh.
Beautiful poem.I loved the ending.
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IT SUX BALLS!!!!
ME AND MY FRIEND THOUGHT THIS SHIT WAS FUCKEN STUPID -
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soo..
who asked for your opinion? besides i don't see you coming up with anything better. besides i dont really care what you and your friend think its your opinion and you can think what you want.
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i like it
to be honest with you u remind me alot of my girl spazz.. -
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really?
whats her name? and whats your name? im Paige. nice to meet you and thanks.
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