Love and nature meet,
in sunsets and starry skies-
different, yet same.
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My username is SilverQ
A contest entry
- Haiku/Senryu Contest --- for 'Visions through Haiku' Members only. (Application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas.
400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Make sure to comment and read my other poems =)
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A beautiful haiku though there are a few spelling mistakes which I have capitalised for easy viewing.
love AND nature meet
in sunsets and STARRY skies
different yet same
I thought there was supposed to be no punctuation marks in a Haiku...but since I am new to this...forgive me if I have given you the wrong information. If you know if one can use punctuation...please let me know. Thanks.
I love the message of this Haiku
Mariana
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I dont know if we are supposed to use punctuation....only that I do =).
Thank you for the corrections and God bless.
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Thank you for your Haiku:
Love an nature meet,
in sunsets and stary skies-
different, yet same.
A beautiful write with deep meaning.
Well-expressed.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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Thank you for third =)
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I have been reading through your comments on the entries of this contest, and have seen that you are a VERY GOOD commenter- always finding something good about an entry. You are going on my favorites.
Thank you and God bless.
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Thats an interesting one :]
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K....why?
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So that I can make sure that you are a member of the group.
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