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one night

so many things going on,
not sure where i'll be tomarrow,
am i going to even have a home.
not sure who will be there tomarrow,
who is going to use me today.
is it even going to be there tomarrow,
or is being used taken it away.
no home, no childhood,
no one to care,
just some people to take it away,
taking my heart, my home, my childhood.
everyday it's someone new,
just a one night stand kind of guy.

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    December 1, 2008

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    Aww, this is sad =[... I like it though, i can feel the emotion also. Very strong poem, made me think a little :]