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Ending Everything

i want to forget it all
to let it go and fall
throw it back and far away
to another place on another day
remembering makes it hard to live
as each day passes its harder to give
into something thats all a mistake
no love to have or make
and in search for something right
i take to my heart this piercing knife
in hopes to achieve the perfect goal
i'll give up my very soul
to bury the pain
and wash away his name
as i dry the tears that come from my eyes
dying is the only way to stop my cries
and as i walk the road of lonely days
our time together slowly replays
good and bad
happy and sad
some moments we were mad
some moments made us glad
hiding myself behind a laugh and smile
im hurtting all the while

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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    December 5, 2008
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    wow

    your poem is amazing..i can feel your pain and how badly you want it to go away. I felt like that before, i hope everything gets better..i love your poem!!!!!!!


  • Guerrero
    November 14, 2008
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    very beautiful.. amazing.. good luck in the contest