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You are my sun

The sun reflects off windows
through my pitch black skies.
The sun reflects off windows
aiming for my eyes.
Such a beautiful thing
but still it makes me blind.
You do the same yet make my day
because my blind love for you
will forever stay.

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A quick write, just for this contest. I hope you like it

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