Winter
Dualistic
Landscape softened by snow
Hardened by Ice and polar wind
Arctic
Author notes
winter white
In a list
A contest entry
- whiter words by Nicolette.
1500 points, ended November 20, 2008, 33 entries
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You've done very well to show us the concept of dualism in winter here! I actually never thought of it that way (maybe because we don't get much snow here in South Africa). But that is what a poet should do: to show us the familiar in a fresh way.
I would have prefered the cinquain to flow a bit more as it leans a bit towards the didactic form, but other than that, a very good write. Thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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that's like the weather man in poetic form. One day beautiful next day 40 below in Winterpeg now that's white..I know
kudo's Draig aine
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It is dualistic!
Hard ice; soft snow. Nothing whiter than a white-out in an Arctic blizzard!
Good luck.
Lyndon.
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blizzard
thank you very much, my meaning was well recieved
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wow...Freezing comes to mind...Lovely piece
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thank you
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed in a short poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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thanks
my fist try at this form
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